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It was raining like hell, while Sasuke was patrolling Konoha forest.
He ran fast, full of anger because Kakashi sensei let him do this,
While it was normally Naruto’s turn to do it!
“Goddamn it, where’s that dobe if you need him, he’s dead meat if I catch a cold!” sasuke whispered silently:” He’s probably hanging in the ramen bar or something…A well…lucky for me everything is normal at the mome…”
BANG!!!
He fell over something that was lying on the ground.
“OH FOR THE LOVE OF….huh?” Sasuke looked more closely at the thing, and he rubbed the mud out off his eyes.
“Naruto???!!!!” Naruto lay in the mud, rain and blood , hardly breathing . Sasuke yelled in panic, took the boy in his arms and saw his face, dirty , with closed eyes. And blood streamed out his eyes.
Sasuke took Naruto,
And ran like he never did.

3 days later:
Sasuke sat on a chair in the hospital.
Waiting for news of his team mate
“Why do I worry so much for him?” he wondered:” He’s not that important to me, is he?”
The flashback of Naruto, covered in mud and blood, made him gasp.
He closed his eyes, and told himself that everything was going to be allright,
that Naruto couldn’t die! He was too strong for that…right??He couldn’t just leave us behind, could he?
But the future wasn’t going to be like Sasuke tought…

A nurse walked to Sasuke.
He didn’t like the expression on her face.
“You’re the friend of Naruto right ?” she asked
“Yeah…”
“Follow me.”
Sasuke followed her trough the hospital,
But they stopped before a door.
“Be prepared for what your going to see ok?…hm maybe it’s better if I tell you it right away…”She had an extremely sad face.  Sasukes hart raced: “What,what???”Sasuke asked. “Well…we did what we could, but his eyes are terribly damaged. He’s probably blind for the rest of his life.
Time stopped . Sasuke’s mind went blank. It couldn’t be…No way …
“Careful” said the nurse,” he doesn’t know it yet, it’s too early to tell him.”
She opened the door, and let him in. “Hey Naruto-kun, your friend is here.”
Naruto lied in a bed. Bruises covered his body and face. And he had a bandage for his eyes. “Huhn?friend??” said Naruto “Iruka sensei??”
“No it’s me….”respond Sasuke,too shocked to call him dobe.
“Oh … hello teme!”Naruto laughed …
He didn’t know that he wouldn’t ever see a thing again, realised Sasuke.
Silently rolled a tear over his face.
Yeaaaaah .....
My first fanfic EVUR XP
please be gentel !
(**srry for bad english , i had my dad to correct it :O
but....)

It was actually a comic, but i don't feel like posting it...:O
becuze i 'm scared of bad comments :(

maybe i post it..... 0.0
Depends on people who like this ...
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:iconanimeloverfox:
animeloverfox Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Y u no make it happy
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:iconyaoiforever41:
yaoiforever41 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome fanfic, please post more!! >U<
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:icongarraluvforeva95:
garraluvforeva95 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
so he goes blind
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:iconyaoi-the-smex:
Yaoi-the-smex Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
jeeah...i think i'm a little too mean for our dear naru-chan :'(

but i'm gonna try to make the story ends good :D
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:icondestinychild24:
DestinyChild24 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008
awwww how sad ;(.... but i like it :D very very good!
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:iconyaoi-the-smex:
Yaoi-the-smex Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
THANKKK YOUUU

it was lately a crazy -few months so i hadn't been on this account like for ages !
yuu encourage meeeeeeeh

*hugs you to death*
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:icondestinychild24:
DestinyChild24 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
o_O... uhm ur welcome? xDDD ~hugs back~...
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:iconhoratio-neji209-4eva:
horatio-neji209-4eva Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
I like it

keep continuing with it!
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:iconyaoi-the-smex:
Yaoi-the-smex Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
thanxx im going to stat again with it :)
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:iconhoratio-neji209-4eva:
your welcome!

okay!
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